The Story Thread
Resurrect a thread thats more than 2 weeks old, time to pass the buck hue cause your style is ice cold. fourteen days to write up a paragraph, with weak raps, go back and molest your cabbage patch. All I hear are fake a$$ prisoner rhymes and kill lists, I chill with ur boss, whose dill you get all filled with. Leave the R-A-P like I left you and your moms, cause ur verses really sit with the manure in the barns.
ya verse reads like two year olds learnin to write… I could type in single syllables and come with deeper and more worthy rhymes… You wanna write like a rainbow rockin’ will smith, but more gay--and in cursive? Fine…. and next time you accuse me of biting, go on google and search my lines.. cuz frankly, you ain’t impressin me, like bodybuilders benchin’ the bar… you’re beneath me, like the contact point of lek’s featherin’ parts!... hell, I could swallow you whole but you’re better in parts… you got nothing better to do than get online, and start reppin’ ya car!... and since you wanna call me a biter, lemme break it down for you… and hopefully it’ll be enough, and you won’t doubt the proof… cuz you think writing rhymes is hard? When anyone can do this—even someone as simple and clouded as YOU?…
There’s nothing more wack than a cat that tries to make his verse sound deep, sayin’ my sh*t’s ‘ice cold’ is the stab in the dark that never found me… “pass the buck?” to who? Not you, cuz you suck dude… Haha, yeah you come with clichés, I can come up with some too… here try these on for size: you suck, you’re wack, go home and mother F*CK YOU.
This kid is funny, he can’t even count… it’s been 17 days not 14, that should give you a clue that he dunno what he’s talking about… and cabbage patch? can’t even write a rhyme to fit in the whole name of those kids!... and you tryin’ to diss? What is this, elementary rhymes 101, AKA “my skills are basically zip”?... and the only thing more pathetic is this:
You worded the end weirdly, and it’s grammatically off... haha, ending with a prepositional phrase is actually wrong, perhaps it’d work if you were skilled enough to write artistically or as though part of a song?... it’s “with whose dill you get filled,” not that crap that you thought was savage and hot… f*ck it, this bastard is lost…
I’m incredibly scared, you spelled RAP out and I’ve gotta run for the hills… I’ve got a mathematical equation to measure your skill, it’s the square of the sum of twelve and two, all of which multiplied by the double of nil…. Is this kid f*ckin’ for real?
Originally Posted by pdjafari
Resurrect a thread thats more than 2 weeks old, time to pass the buck hue cause your style is ice cold.
Originally Posted by pdjafari
fourteen days to write up a paragraph, with weak raps, go back and molest your cabbage patch.
Originally Posted by pdjafari
All I hear are fake a$$ prisoner rhymes and kill lists, I chill with ur boss, whose dill you get all filled with
Originally Posted by pdjafari
Leave the R-A-P like I left you and your moms, cause ur verses really sit with the manure in the barns
Last edited by hueman; Jul 11, 2005 at 04:30 PM.
chill bro its a forum, go take a cold shower and come post when your feeling better. something obviously got to you, otherwise you wouldnt have written a thesis paper in response, breaking down every verse and line.
Correct me if i am wrong but Hip Hop and grammatic are oxymorons??
since when has hip hop followed any rules in regards grammer and language!?!
O and if you dont like it than Bu ga Dau to you and Du mai!!
Correct me if i am wrong but Hip Hop and grammatic are oxymorons??
since when has hip hop followed any rules in regards grammer and language!?!

O and if you dont like it than Bu ga Dau to you and Du mai!!
Originally Posted by pdjafari
chill bro its a forum, go take a cold shower and come post when your feeling better. something obviously got to you, otherwise you wouldnt have written a thesis paper in response, breaking down every verse and line.
Correct me if i am wrong but Hip Hop and grammatic are oxymorons??
since when has hip hop followed any rules of in regards grammer and language!?!
O and if you dont like it than Bu ga Dau to you and Du mai!!
Correct me if i am wrong but Hip Hop and grammatic are oxymorons??
since when has hip hop followed any rules of in regards grammer and language!?!

O and if you dont like it than Bu ga Dau to you and Du mai!!

but yeah, as a sidenote: it's really cool to have someone call me a biter over IM to my friend.
"suburban blacks and hood-tough" sounded like a verse from Nas Illmatic or It was Written album....
all in good fun, i was just having fun but it looked like u took me serious. anyways no hard feelings, lek go get your man a big mac i know you got at least 2 in each pocket!!
Ooooooohhhhhhhhhh
all in good fun, i was just having fun but it looked like u took me serious. anyways no hard feelings, lek go get your man a big mac i know you got at least 2 in each pocket!!
Ooooooohhhhhhhhhh



